Tuesday, July 16, 2013

My Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

A long distance I walked so far in my path of life
Unknown to me how far still I need to cover
Weary and drowsy, forlorn by fallacies
Dreaded even to rest with dire times reaching a crest
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Somanathan Iyer
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Heather Wilkins 19 July 2013

with hope the road ahead will be much better than in the past. peaceful and soothing. good write about life.

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David Wood 19 July 2013

Very much like 'The Road Not Travelled' by Robert Frost or my 'The Path Undecided'. A good write.

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Valerie Dohren 18 July 2013

One should always remain hopeful of better times ahead, even though the future seems dim. Very good write.

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Valsa George 18 July 2013

The road ahead, let us hope, is a road smooth and straight with shade and shelter, unlike the road left behind! A great write, but a little distressing!

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