Friday, September 25, 2009

My Itinerary! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

MY ITINERARY

Like an old melody straying down a deserted subway at night,
My itinerary goes around for a spin & falls around me like sawdust,
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Seema joglekar
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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 October 2009

I wave off the day in broad daylight, Cover away from light, I walk through a shadow.................... .heart yet croons at times by shadow soul never knows least reeks of distinction....................wonderful write of philosophy by life, evocatively introspective yet ingenious by imagery and metaphors deserving much more than 10+++, thanks for sharing

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Mubeen Sadhika 10 October 2009

Amazing. well written. nice thought.

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Catrina Heart 25 September 2009

Awesome philosophical theme....wonderful play of words...10/10

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Saadat Tahir 25 September 2009

very nice reflective and philosophical well done cheers tc

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