Friday, September 4, 2009

My Inspiration Comments

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Look at the sun,
he burns himself,
to give us light in the day.
Look at the moon,
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rahul sharma
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Vijay Menon 01 November 2009

its a very nice poem friend keep it up

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Deepti Agarwal 06 October 2009

sweet simple form of describing things n their work... :) Good work..keep it up..

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Nihar ... 28 September 2009

simple and nice.... we experience all these things but never realise thir importance.... good that u wrote and helped me gain inspiration :)

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Tiffany Hayes 26 September 2009

once again you amazed me! ! lovely poem

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Obinna Eruchie 26 September 2009

And how nature's care with beauty has a way of inspiring man. Interesting.

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Sherri Coulter 11 September 2009

mmmmmmmmm......I hope I'm someones inspiration. good poem!

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Shekhar Joshi 10 September 2009

This one is good too......teaches the value of selflessness and sharing.........

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