My Inside Comments

sadiq... you could go on and on with your loving muses...........beautiful write again

Its like you're suffering from an internal bleeding, waiting to be disposed.A sadness beckoned.

beautifull thoughts.nicely expressed.thanx for sharing. a 10+++ fro me surya

my inside...this is a beautiful piece..a smart expression of an author's feeling..

nice write Sadiq...rhythmic romantic and good use of similes...thanks...10

a well expressed introspection with lots of simile... a good narrative poem and much interaction about life...well penned...

nice similes: ''Like the dropp of water I rolled down the surface The dawn like the rise of the supernatural deity'' wonderful monologue, nice rhythm, well expressed poem..........

My inside was like the sole of feet of those Whose love in the storms for want of requital Bring reality not unlike my fantasy in my hands Down your lips my fingers feel the softness The corner of the heart that has you sitting Worship is my habit whether empty or naught --------- This have a lot of imageries and metaphors...you have expressed yourself in profoundness as yourself in the inside pace....rich piece! ! ! well crafted! ! ! 10+++