My Insecurities Comments

Noen, I especially enjoyed your last 5 stanzas & your rhyming. BUT, though I think most stanzas ARE complete sentences, I would prefer reading it without EACH LINE beginning with a CAPITAL LETTER & WITHOUT the punctuation 'scheme' which YOU & some other poets use. bri : ) e. : ) briR

I wonder WHY the speaker despises her/his 'reflection' and wonder what the reflection represents. ..'disguise''? .. This was well worth reading a 2nd time.

I'm not sure if you are using 'fumes' as a noun e.g 'a gas', or maybe as a 'noun' derived from the verb 'fume'. BUT, overall, I give this poem **** (4) stars.