Tuesday, October 14, 2014

My Innocence Comments

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Who goes against me?
Nobody!
But the very single seconds
That spare my life no more
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Walani Ndhlovu
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Ramesh Rai 27 October 2014

Very interesting write to give off innocence. loved reading it

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Kay Staley 14 October 2014

How interesting to think that you have innocence but that it will end when you are gone. How nice of you to want to help someone by giving it away. Nice idea with this poem; the approach/style could be improved, but overall i enjoyed reading it.

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Walani Ndhlovu

Walani Ndhlovu

Blantyre, Malawi
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