I met a little girl,
As fragile as could be
And i don't know somehow,
She reminded me of me!
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tattered beings literlly sprout but u took a novel way to describe the feelings very nice p[oetry...ita atenner cheers
no doubt, innocence is a reality and heart feeling age of some one... its really a very emotional and good poem and hope you will never stop writing.... just go on...10 ++++++
keep the innocence within........... pour it as poetry.............
the way u write is certainly unique and the flow of your poems unmatchable excellent
another wonderful poem....................keep up the good work.............
A very melancholic description of your refined innerself that has become apparent in the form of your innocence by reading this elagant poem.............10/10 Best Wishes Sameer
ishita, that child is within everyone...we seldom meet her.............
very deep poem...i felt it so close to my heart...it is a gem.. all i could do is a vote for ten.. :)
so nice and sad....really we need to fall bfr we get sucess of walking well....and in every soul there is a little boy or girlwho shows us the reallity bcoz the reality is so pure like a little boy's heart..well written ishita.keep writing
lovely poem...of innocence....its explains the reality