Sunday, March 29, 2009

My Innocence Comments

Rating: 5.0

I met a little girl,
As fragile as could be
And i don't know somehow,
She reminded me of me!
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Ishita Mehta
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VEER the ultimate boy 31 March 2012

lovely poem...of innocence....its explains the reality

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Siddharth Singh 19 July 2009

Beautifully written poem. 10 all the way.

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Saadat Tahir 02 June 2009

tattered beings literlly sprout but u took a novel way to describe the feelings very nice p[oetry...ita atenner cheers

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Afzal Shauq 30 May 2009

no doubt, innocence is a reality and heart feeling age of some one... its really a very emotional and good poem and hope you will never stop writing.... just go on...10 ++++++

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premji premji 11 May 2009

keep the innocence within........... pour it as poetry.............

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Shekhar Joshi 01 May 2009

the way u write is certainly unique and the flow of your poems unmatchable excellent

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 26 April 2009

dear friend u are truly immaculate

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Prachi Malik 08 April 2009

another wonderful poem....................keep up the good work.............

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Sameer Ahmed 04 April 2009

A very melancholic description of your refined innerself that has become apparent in the form of your innocence by reading this elagant poem.............10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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premji premji 03 April 2009

ishita, that child is within everyone...we seldom meet her.............

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Vimalkumar N 30 March 2009

very deep poem...i felt it so close to my heart...it is a gem.. all i could do is a vote for ten.. :)

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 30 March 2009

so nice and sad....really we need to fall bfr we get sucess of walking well....and in every soul there is a little boy or girlwho shows us the reallity bcoz the reality is so pure like a little boy's heart..well written ishita.keep writing

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Demi Buxton 29 March 2009

i think that the poem is realy good and down to heart

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