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Really well considered thoughts about the direction of your country and what Independence means.

a great piece of poetry none i can say accept excellent work and tribute

I salute that poet who created such a nice poem to celebrate the independence day of a country. The real citizen always thinks silently the common good for all the people, not for a single segment of a society. Secondly, I thank to Vdb who has jointly translated the poem to know the world-readers the real inner-reality of a country by its socio-economic status. Thirdly, repeated use of the word useless becomes inevitable by its proper use. Thanks for sharing......................Pranab k c

Well, i think we, in this country suffer your complaints too.

great write about your country independence. congratulations nice reference to your country

WOW! nice piece of work for your country's Independence Day, with great patriotic feelings. Blessings to you and your country :)

A scathing criticism. Truth will be harsh to listen. I love your way of expression.Kindly read my poem I love my country: India, but..

a great piece. thanks for the comments. :)

Thanks for the detailed note of the poem...To you and All Indonesian my country's neighbor, Happy Independence Day...August could be the month that full of independence days around the world celebrate...May in this month we also find our way to free ourselves to be better souls and life..Freedom in heart! _Soul

A sublime critique of d people's situation n u translatd it eloquently. :)

The world needs freedom and governments without greed on their mind. A great poem.

Its true and sad, todays world is facing this situations. Independence that was fought with lives and blood, it seems there is no value for it... Beautiful poem Adheez..Loved reading it.

This seems to be the true state of the world today, the rich rule the poor and get richer in doing so.

This is a thoughtful thread fraught with worries, preoccupations towards the sad real living conditions of your beloved country's people. May things improve for more balance and prosperity! Long live your country, Adheez!