A moon lit night,
A little boat is waving,
A torn sail is dancing,
A dim hurricane is lighting,
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stupendous written piece......great theme in clarity! ! ! 10
a dramatic life! a simple and clear perspective! I liked your life full of simplicity contrary to this complicated world well expressed. 10+++++
vivid imagination, well written poem, lovely to read..............10+++
Good dream written out poetically. Nice writing bringing out usage of imagination that all readers can relate to. We all imagine and dream, that is where I get most of my material from. The mind is a wonderful thing to share. DC
The clear imagery reflects a clear longing for a peaceful space. May you find it. I enjoyed this very much.