Monday, December 10, 2012

My Imaginations Illusion Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm not imaging this
Am I?
The moments we shared?
The smiles
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Alla Simone 23 December 2012

I like the feeling of I'm not crazy, am I? that you've so skillfully captured verse after verse in this piece of writing. Great job!

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Stevie Taite 11 December 2012

Trust your instinct! Good one! X

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 11 December 2012

Hmm a mesmerizing moments romantic poem i enjoyd. U aint seeing illusions. Passions r real but how long they last is debatable.

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Lyn Paul 10 December 2012

This is great Tiger Lily... if it is not real it is then a beauty to dream. Thank you

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Aria Siren 10 December 2012

Ooooh. Very sweet poem mixed with doubt and reality. I like how you left it openended-it could be real or just a dream. Either way-I quite like it :) I'm not imaging this Am I? The way my heart started to race The looks you gave me The way your breath tickled my face? I love those butterfly feelings :) You captured it well. (Is this part 2 of the saga? :))

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