Sunday, November 10, 2013

My Illusions Have To Go... Comments

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I first see a smiling face somewhere
But as I go near to see it close,
It fades out in no time!
I then see a caring hand very close
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 November 2013

As long as human civilisation exist there will be an illusion First part of the poem is full of Illusion what we think is not as per the thought, a false idea or belief leads where...Second part also we can see the frail humanity in toto the poem is about mentally weak and physically weak in both cases we are envisaged negative or positive we must follow the positive or from both we have to find discard not any more thank uou Dinesh

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Wahab Abdul 10 November 2013

the second stanza is tremendously beautiful.. love the poem

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