Thursday, November 22, 2012

My Identity! Comments

Rating: 4.0

To fit into another's mould
Constantly changed shape
Now I am not what I am.
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Valsa George
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 20 December 2014

The very truth spelt out here, going through many a strife, many a path, many a shape, we lose at last our own identity and that becomes our identity......Valsa......very intelligently crafted.......10

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Walterrean Salley 15 December 2012

... Now I am not what I am. It's always best to be yourself. You have a unique mould, and cannot fit just any mould. It only works when you are yourself. Small, but powerful. I enjoyed.

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Vipins Puthooran 06 December 2012

Now I am not what I am/ Amazing line...I felt this line on my senses)))

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Valerie Dohren 05 December 2012

We all try to be what we believe others expect us to be, and so lose sight of who we really are. Good one.

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Anita Sehgal 03 December 2012

this is so true.. we go thru life like this and never find our true self!

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Lyn Paul 02 December 2012

Thank you Valsa..... I love knowing who I am.... Don't ever change for anyone.

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Neetha Sasidharan 02 December 2012

small yet nice poem.....kp writing......

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Gajanan Mishra 01 December 2012

I am not what I am. Good thought. Thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment,

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 28 November 2012

Our identity can be easily recognized, even after so many plastic works! so we have to accept our identity with out any doubt! lots of truth!

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Neela Nath Das 25 November 2012

To compromise with the changing situation, we are changing our true selves. Thanks for sharing.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 25 November 2012

Nice poem! We often try to adjust to others wishes thereby losing ourselves. Best regards, Chandra Thiagarajan

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Kee Thampi 23 November 2012

A thimble but humble to protect u... the God of( mad) another's mould

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Anita Sehgal 23 November 2012

truly said... we try so hard to be what we are not..

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Valerie Dohren 22 November 2012

Deep down you will always be who you are, you just need to recognize it - to thine own self be true.

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But you can reshape yourself at a later time perhaps!

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