A silky mane shining like a brilliant jewel.
Short clean nails as the finest ivory.
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Brandy... WOW. That was REALLY SUPER GOOD. Even though these were kind of difficult to write, you still managed to write an AMAZING poem. Perfection. LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE.
'Breath uncalled for the mint's bribery.' That is verbal awesomeness to me. For someone who claims that this poem was difficult to write, you certainly did a wonderful job. Great job and I hope to see more (unforced) poems from you in the future. Excellent. :)