Sunday, December 24, 2017

My Ideal Country Comments

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Translated by Yiyan HAN(c)
2008-02-05 (last modified 2017-12-24)
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Feipeng Shang
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Rebecca Navarre 18 January 2018

Ever Such Heart Felt Beautiful Imagery! ! ! ! ! And Spirit, Of Your Country! ! ! ! ! Ever So Moving! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Feipeng Shang 19 January 2018

Thank you. It's the poet's idealistic country he cries for :)

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Akhtar Jawad 17 January 2018

I wish you and your country full of aromatic fragrance in each place. A beautiful patriotic poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 January 2018

Part Four: Wishing you Feipeng Shang A Very Happy 2018 and may our Dreams come true, yours and mine. Alone we fall, United we stand! Wish you much success, sincerest from Sylvia Frances Chan, Dutch Poetess born in Jakarta, Indonesia.

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Feipeng Shang 04 January 2018

Thank you very much Sylvia Frances (sorry if Frances is a part of your surname) ;) Yes everyone must keep dreaming for a better future though sometimes it looks bleeding...

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 January 2018

My surname is only Chan so Sylvia and Frances are the names to call me with. Thank you for your response. My comment was too long and that's why I must send it four times.Just call me Sylvia.

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Feipeng Shang 05 January 2018

Thanks. Thought I'd make sure, Sylvia. :)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 January 2018

Part Three: Indeed we must keep dreaming for a sweeter, a better and peaceful world. IF we all do, then we surely have SUCCESS.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 January 2018

Part Two: you are dreaming of Utopia. Ah! Keep dreaming, surely one day this dream would be visible in real life.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 January 2018

Part One: A Loveliest poem, excellently rendered. In your dreams you wish this peaceful country, but it exists only in your heart,

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Valsa George 01 January 2018

To dream of such a country is every man's right! Perhaps it could be a land existing only in imagination! But only if each citizen of a country has such beautiful dreams, we can effect positive changes! A lovely poem! A sure 10

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Feipeng Shang 01 January 2018

Yes, let's keep dreaming and working for a better world in 2018.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 December 2017

A beautifully crafted write. It expresses in detail the attributes of your ideal land. It is near perfect state, Utopia.

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Feipeng Shang 29 December 2017

Yes, it's a Utopia, opposite to reality: (

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2017

It’s unique piece of poetry! How beautifully you have described your country which is a piece of land in your heart just like a piece of diamond! You have given wonderful attributes to your country. In the last stanza, “I wish my country blossom on every inch of her land/Four seasons like spring, bumper harvests year after year/And peace and harmony all year round”…..a beautiful poem, wonderfully translated! !

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Feipeng Shang 25 December 2017

Thank you, Dr. This is the ideal country that lives in the poet's heart, and his wishes.

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