Translated by Yiyan HAN(c)
2008-02-05 (last modified 2017-12-24)
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I wish you and your country full of aromatic fragrance in each place. A beautiful patriotic poem.
Part Four: Wishing you Feipeng Shang A Very Happy 2018 and may our Dreams come true, yours and mine. Alone we fall, United we stand! Wish you much success, sincerest from Sylvia Frances Chan, Dutch Poetess born in Jakarta, Indonesia.
Thank you very much Sylvia Frances (sorry if Frances is a part of your surname) ;) Yes everyone must keep dreaming for a better future though sometimes it looks bleeding...
My surname is only Chan so Sylvia and Frances are the names to call me with. Thank you for your response. My comment was too long and that's why I must send it four times.Just call me Sylvia.
Part Three: Indeed we must keep dreaming for a sweeter, a better and peaceful world. IF we all do, then we surely have SUCCESS.
Part Two: you are dreaming of Utopia. Ah! Keep dreaming, surely one day this dream would be visible in real life.
Part One: A Loveliest poem, excellently rendered. In your dreams you wish this peaceful country, but it exists only in your heart,
To dream of such a country is every man's right! Perhaps it could be a land existing only in imagination! But only if each citizen of a country has such beautiful dreams, we can effect positive changes! A lovely poem! A sure 10
A beautifully crafted write. It expresses in detail the attributes of your ideal land. It is near perfect state, Utopia.
It’s unique piece of poetry! How beautifully you have described your country which is a piece of land in your heart just like a piece of diamond! You have given wonderful attributes to your country. In the last stanza, “I wish my country blossom on every inch of her land/Four seasons like spring, bumper harvests year after year/And peace and harmony all year round”…..a beautiful poem, wonderfully translated! !
Thank you, Dr. This is the ideal country that lives in the poet's heart, and his wishes.
Ever Such Heart Felt Beautiful Imagery! ! ! ! ! And Spirit, Of Your Country! ! ! ! ! Ever So Moving! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Thank you. It's the poet's idealistic country he cries for :)