Saturday, September 26, 2009

My Humble Pie Comments

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I toss my mind wonders,

I turn my heart thunders,
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Andrew Joseph
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Shekhar Joshi 01 October 2009

Hey aren't u trying very hard to rhyme......don't try and force it........ could have been better......nice one still........ ;)

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Moriah Reyes 29 September 2009

awww...very sweet...very good...i hope whoever this was to that you were granted forgivness.

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