Wednesday, May 6, 2009

My Humble Abode Comments

Rating: 5.0

Money, money, money
In a rich man’s world
Honey, honey, honey
I don’t belong there
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Sandra Martyres
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Kesav Easwaran 20 May 2009

Those 'principles and taboos' you mentioned there are good to preserve inside...they keep your mind always a peaceful abode...good poem...thanks...10

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Raj Arumugam 13 May 2009

a good song (echoing Abba) and brought in so close to contemporary events...

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Michael Harmon 13 May 2009

This is a sentiment I can appreciate, Sandra. Nice expression of it! One suggestion. These days, it's okay to rhyme 'understand' with 'underhanded'. I would suggest changing 'underhand' to 'underhanded', which would be more syntactically correct, and still be a modern rhyme.

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Meggie Gultiano 07 May 2009

nor i belong to that class, Sandra. I am rich in friends through and through, and the love of my family.I am poor, and prefer it that way, because i have peace inside. A strong message you have here, and definitely an eye opener. With real friends and the love of my family, my day is well taken cared of. Thanks a lot for this great sharing

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a very vital subject sandra....staying honest for what...more then doing it as a principle...it keeps your conscience clear

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Fiona Davidson 06 May 2009

Wonderful heartfelt write Sandra...less is definatly more....Fi 10+++

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Indira Renganathan 06 May 2009

I'm there with you already to thank you for sharing...kindly read my money poems at leisure....thank you

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Mamta Agarwal 06 May 2009

you caqn only live with someone who shares your values. at the end of the day you want peace of mind. very well expressed 10 mamta

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