Wednesday, October 11, 2017

My House Is Deserted Now Comments

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How strange
I could cut open a brain
look into hippocampus
pituitary, amygdala
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Ravi Kopra
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Unwritten Soul 12 October 2017

Fabrizio Frosini definitely one of sweet friend of mine here, he has a great italian poetry...but what i look at your poem, it might be inspired by Fabrizio but the language play, the cleverness of your expression sound authentically yours...it has touching feel and wonderful pick of medical relationship of anatomy to link someone feeling with biological being...we writers always use heart as emotion expression but you use amygdala, hypocampus which a small region but conquer all emotional control..a cool way of writing dear Sir Ravi Kopra

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Ravi Kopra 12 October 2017

Unwritten Soul, thanks for the read and for your comment.. I am going to use 'Unwritten Soul', your nom de plume (not you) , in some poem. How did you come with this name? It has an emotional tinge.

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Unwritten Soul 13 October 2017

Thank you, Unwritten Soul origin...it was a long time ago when i tried to pick what is the name to be called that represent what my mind want to tell, it maybe new at that time where i really want to show what is inside me, my thinking, real personality that no one knows when they talk to me, because i have to live to understand people and i cant be so selfishly tell what is inside if they are not ready to what i am going to say or share, and there is a lot of thing behind this name that i could direct message you later...somehow after years i wear this name i feel more confidence of it just part of me now but funny things now i have realized that some people are using this name also for their ID in social media... i have make sure no body use this name that time but now that could be mistakenly guess it is me, because few people are using same name hahahaha...it just a coincident though..whatever their reason for picking this name, i feel glad that there is commonity between us despite living in wide and spacious world :)

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