My House Comments

But it's my house Built from parts of me Infused with my soul...I sincerely admire the sense of dignity unfolded in this bit of expression! Top poetry! !

This is a blues poem having heartfelt depiction. High penmanship. The last stanza has much impact i, e... But it’s my house Built from parts of me Infused with my soul So I must let it enfold me In its cold clammy hold.

Of my broken self! But with hope. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The pervading melancholy and sadness reflected by these lines are indeed choking! But it’s my house Built from parts of me Infused with my soul So I must let it enfold me In its cold clammy hold. Here what we see is a cold passive resignation which is jolting! Great write Nosheen!

an overtone of sadness pervades through out the whole poem, a well penned poem by beautiful soul, thanks for sharing.