Sunday, March 25, 2012
My Hospital Stay Comments
Rating: ★3.3
Four white walls and a ceiling light defined my scenic view
A small TV on a pull out arm and a picture quite askew
Old tan spreads and thin white sheets were thrown about the bed
And fell in heaps about my feet like a puffy thunderhead
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Valerie Dohren
25 March 2012
Excellent Dick - maybe you could recite this to your patients to raise a laugh! Extremely well rhymed reflecting your poetic talents.
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7/31/2025 7:05:40 PM # 1.0.0
well written indeed Richard, it all flows together to bring out a flawless poem at the end.keep up the good poetry.