Monday, November 19, 2012

My Hope In Dreams Comments

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Slowly slowly I walk away
From the brightness of the day.

The Sun dips in and the wind will roar
As I walk along the shore.
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NITHEESH ANNADANAM
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Chandra Thiagarajan 02 December 2012

A nice hope in dreams, ! Your very first poem speaks well! At this very young age when you can pen such a beautiful poem I'm sure you'll rise high in the world of poetry! With all best wishes.

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Vishal Sharma 21 November 2012

good play with words...awesome

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Rajendra Prasad 20 November 2012

good work done nitheesh

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Kalpana Annadanam 20 November 2012

I liked your poem very much.

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Kalpana Annadanam 20 November 2012

I liked your poem very much.

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It is the right kind of beginning for you Master Nitheesh. The blend of rhyme and rhythm will hopefully stand by you and your dream poems ahead, I believe. Go ahead and be a master of poetry, Master Nitheesh. All the best

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NITHEESH ANNADANAM

NITHEESH ANNADANAM

CHENNAI, INDIA
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