Sunday, February 15, 2015

My Home Is Your Heart Comments

Rating: 4.6

(I'm)
On my journey
My endless journey
By dream colors I'm on painted stairs
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 August 2018

'My home is your heart' is a gorgeous poem so impressively painted and delineated. Its theme is nice. This poem has special attraction for which I made second visit. I love the following lines.... It was just misguide dream And this cost me missing home Now i am returning again To the shelter of my fragile soul Thanks again for this gem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 March 2018

Sorry if i was away But returning home is sure And my home is your heart I know I'll be safe again.heal me gently.......... really a very fine poem dear poetess. thank u very much. tony

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Mj Lemon 15 March 2018

Tremendous work, Soul. I am reminded of a painter, a sculptor standing in front of his subject. Each stroke of the brush, movement of the hammer takes the artist closer to a destination. There are dead ends, and times to stop and moments of reflection. There are regrets and denials and renewed joy in the discovery that the journey, the brush stroke, may not be entirely in the control of the artist....And so on the journey there are returns to home, feelings of loss...Magnificent poem, Soul!

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Dev Anand 23 October 2017

I may smile I may cry Sometimes i fall Who is gonna keep me safe to protect my soul Only my home...(my home) in other word Only you..only you your heart is my home.... a lovely poem.. full of love and self-disovery. love this poem. dev

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 December 2015

Endless journey with the muse of love and life. Nice work.

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 December 2015

A heart-warming poem - a soul longing to return to itself, returning home; seemingly after an adventure in seeking self-discovery. A beautiful write!

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Simone Inez Harriman 24 November 2015

Soul I love your poem. A beautifully penned spiritual journey that holds hope to heal the heart...stunning 10

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Liza Sudina 27 September 2015

Just caught an idea that our home is inside God! an we are like viruses. sinful and not saint! nice poem!

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Aranthabailu Ummar 13 August 2015

Hi soul, again I am daring to touch your prose as it is my bad habit I don't know how much freedom you will give to attack or attract your works in public. I have measured this poem in three ways as a popular world three in one that is trinity. If I go to speek generally there is a matter of hidden affection on one particular object. You might be seeking help or you might be urging for safety or you are looking for protection. the home & heart coinciding side by side but in this word itself you are going one more object it left for you belief if my belief is correct. First three tranzas expresses your enxities you are having for your choice It is not a sudden turn but it is from your desires. The desire lead you to a bad dream after having a long journey you wanted to turn it but you cannot dreams like colours you can see it but cannot touch. You cannot efford to up the sky But in really it is not possible. When you realised these points you wants return. At the same time you wants a reservation. Here I found the state of confusion. normally one's home is his safest place to feel, to live, to get rest and like more any thing which he wants to do. Co incidentally along its there is one more word heart. What is the soul of these sayings. Is it really a home where born & got up is it sympathizing or earning self confidence from real heart and one more do you seeking help from Allah. Normally this questions comes up when reading your heart is my home and my home is your heart. This is the affection it may comes when we are away from home And also when we admiring our own works or any affection other these. ok how much I wrote here I don't know. and how it is correct I don't know and I did not wrote about full poem only on a few lines I took it. if you found it as it is none of my business please delete it Do not curse wants to be your friendship & careness always

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Ruby Mostazir 28 June 2015

Your heart is my home.....simply n nicely you written abt your emotions Nice to read :)

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Dawn Lambert 24 April 2015

very nice and lovely. great job.

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Ramesh Rai 09 April 2015

I am always fan of ink of US. Nice to read US is coming back to home. Door of PH is always open to all which has given identity to many. Thank you so much for sharing here.

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Vipins Puthooran 04 April 2015

Lost in a way Gravity pull my strength So i left my tears, lessen my burden Show me to the way home for my fragile soul! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! oh my soul

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Amitava Sur 04 April 2015

where ever you find your pleasure and joy but ultimately the sweetest place is the home at last. Very nicely depicted in this poem.

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* Sunprincess * 07 March 2015

......wow so beautifully written and so perfect unwritten soul....a most beautiful poem of love and friendship :)

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Hans Vr 07 March 2015

Beautifully written poem. While reaching for the stars, sometimes we left the ones who really care. Yet the biggest stars are often found at home. I love the poem very much. A great 10

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 05 March 2015

to your heart of gold, dear Soul...you don't know how much i miss you deary....and this poem, it's s so colorful and full of emotional metaphors! : P) it made my return to PH :) cheers

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 03 March 2015

On my endless journey I realize that my home is your heart. Wonderful poem shared really.

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Dave Walker 03 March 2015

Home is where we all return to in the end, we go back to what we love and need, a great poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2015

Sorry if i was away But returning home is sure And my home is your heart I know I'll be safe again........yes, our home is heart of God, we will be safe there. Nice envision. Very nicely composed. Good word choice. Many thanks respected soul, keep the ball rolling.

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