My High School Choir Comments

Mediocrity is not a word I could possibly associate with you, my friend. I'm sure you sang like an angel! Skillfully described, this timeless experience in the school choir. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Herbert, this was a great piece that brought so much sound to the read. Enjoyed! It has my orbicularis oris region twitching in delight! Angie : b

H, this is perfect. As ever, a non-sentimental reminiscence and keen observation finelypenned into a poem that just has the reader right there, so well is the scene depicted, and in particular in the last stanza. Whose eyes haven't looked out for those eyes to meet, unsettled until they do... a grand write. t x