Sunday, September 24, 2017

My Hero Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why this distance and
the silence between us
Suffocates me
Restless here I am
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Rini Shibu
COMMENTS
Sister Frances 28 September 2017

You hit the nail on the head Rini..when you're in love the room is always filled with laughter.An honest, heartfelt poem.

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Rini Shibu 28 September 2017

Thanks Hannah.. Rini

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Kishore Kumar Das 25 September 2017

steps of intimacy choreographed invoking the lover in your captivating lines...

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thank you so much Kishore..

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 25 September 2017

Can you break this silence Fill this place with laughter Once again walk close together Hand in hand, dance with beats.It is a sweet stanza and my hero is a sweet able poem go on Rini jerry.

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thank you so much Soumya.. Rini

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Lamar Cole 25 September 2017

Very beautiful love poem about hero.

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thank you so much lam for your comments

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 September 2017

Love should have more depth. There is restlessness in life. Love makes this beautiful. Amazing poem is shared.10

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thank you so much Kumar for your encouraging words

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Practicing Poetess 24 September 2017

Rini, this is so sweet! Good one! :)

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thank you so much dear poetess

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