Thursday, March 26, 2009
My Hero Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Im in awe as i watch you
Im amazed in everyway
You've become my everything
I thank God for you every day
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Randy Hogan
01 April 2009
So very moving and touching, truly a lovely read. the force is strong in your soul, and his. 10SSSSSSSS
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Sue Sie
26 March 2009
What a lovely verse...well done and thanks for sharing your thoughts..10+
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7/19/2025 7:42:12 AM # 1.0.0
I bet if you didn't worry about making it rhyme it would be great. For some reason I feel that if you had written what you saw in your head, your poem would have a rhythm all its own. a 10