In a garden green we sat
My hand in yours
Yours held I
Roses around
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A lovely romantic poem, well articulated and subtly penned to capture the bliss of love mutually felt between a happy and loving couple. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
a very beautiful poem sir, luvd the way you xpressd emotions..
yeah its good and fully packed with emotions good work... »so close«
Beautiful, so delicately written with lovely imagery. Inspired write! Thanks for sharing.
The irony is the powerful co existence of a poetic mind that is never devoid of elusive romantic flutters. The notes on the dark and shady spaces have finally been replaced by this brilliant write one on a breathing sign.
Awww the poem made of sweetest nectar for sweet fellow...Hmm i think Saaed Jan smile like a bright sun reading the best fragrance poem from you..such a nice time here_SOul
In beauty and love we could get rid of space time and death. Brilliant, loved it! Thank you for share.
wow mind blowing as the only word i could phrase for this sweetly rhyme with poignant end note.....
An utterly beautiful Write! I love that you made stars and moon envious of you love and happiness. You produce perfect magical imagery with your words!
From Paris to your beautiful and perfect love Helen! ! ! Beautiful
My Helen.... This is fabulous... written in jubilant mood with pride of having his beloved with him... he feels himself to be the richest person of the world with bounties of happiness and beauties around.... For resting on my arm Was Helen of Troy... U made me speechless.... Thumbs up for! !
Beautiful romantic poem, a touching one.