Friday, November 9, 2012

My Helen Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a garden green we sat
My hand in yours
Yours held I
Roses around
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Jahan Zeb
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Akhtar Jawad 26 February 2018

Beautiful romantic poem, a touching one.

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Chinedu Dike 12 January 2015

A lovely romantic poem, well articulated and subtly penned to capture the bliss of love mutually felt between a happy and loving couple. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Sahil Sood 17 November 2012

a very beautiful poem sir, luvd the way you xpressd emotions..

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Nabila ima 16 November 2012

Nice poem and you can express what you feel. I like it

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So Close 15 November 2012

yeah its good and fully packed with emotions good work... »so close«

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Dave Walker 15 November 2012

A very beautiful and fantastic poem. A great tribute.

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Hazel Durham 13 November 2012

Beautiful, so delicately written with lovely imagery. Inspired write! Thanks for sharing.

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The irony is the powerful co existence of a poetic mind that is never devoid of elusive romantic flutters. The notes on the dark and shady spaces have finally been replaced by this brilliant write one on a breathing sign.

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Vijay Sai R 12 November 2012

a fascinating piece of poetry

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Anita Sehgal 11 November 2012

very romantic.poem..! .

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Unwritten Soul 11 November 2012

Awww the poem made of sweetest nectar for sweet fellow...Hmm i think Saaed Jan smile like a bright sun reading the best fragrance poem from you..such a nice time here_SOul

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Elena Sandu 11 November 2012

In beauty and love we could get rid of space time and death. Brilliant, loved it! Thank you for share.

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Xelam Kan™ 10 November 2012

wow mind blowing as the only word i could phrase for this sweetly rhyme with poignant end note.....

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Stevie Taite 10 November 2012

An utterly beautiful Write! I love that you made stars and moon envious of you love and happiness. You produce perfect magical imagery with your words!

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Valerie Dohren 09 November 2012

Beautifully written, inspired poem.

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Poetheart Morgan 09 November 2012

From Paris to your beautiful and perfect love Helen! ! ! Beautiful

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Saeed Jan 09 November 2012

My Helen.... This is fabulous... written in jubilant mood with pride of having his beloved with him... he feels himself to be the richest person of the world with bounties of happiness and beauties around.... For resting on my arm Was Helen of Troy... U made me speechless.... Thumbs up for! !

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