Thursday, May 27, 2010

My Heavy Past Comments

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It was when I was young
Before I could even consider what I was doing
I took this ball of heavy metal
I hung it around my neck
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Barry Lindelihle Mvelase
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 28 September 2012

Amazing imagery in this great poem, well penned indeed...most of us carry that burden for the rest of our lives, we must just learn accept that, you can never change your past but you can always make your future what you want it to be, skeletons must be locked away in the closet and the keys thrown in the see, we all make mistakes, so we just need to learn from them and never be caught on the same spot again...wonderful poem friend... Siya_! !

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