*** My Heavenly Father *** Comments

Si tu padre se pregunta Que si mi queres a mi Di con la boca que no con el corazon que si If father says How much you love me son I shall not tell it by my mouth I shall tell it by my heart DECA.......(a 10)

Dripping withe daughterly devotion. Well written 10/10

Superb poem...............I love it.10++++

I think this is wonderful!

wow...thats so sweet...a father who is ur guardian on poemhunter... lucky to have him... :) i hope he is proud of ur dedication to him... :)

fathers won't normally talk in open pages about daughters... here, may be your ph godfather reserves some thing special...a beautiful poem...both in construction and in presentation...ten for you Anjali...10

Father's wants you to grow more and more...I guess

Anbjali What an excellent poem as this has such strength. I find some people can't tune in to my poetical side, but at least your Father could make an effort. Can he understand poetry? You know some people just can't understand it. Print it off and give it to him. I would.....but do tell him you love him too (if you do) . Excellent write. regards Karin Anderson

'Inundate my heart With paternal praise- an ambrosial delight' wow. loved this poem, thats exactly the love of a father is..... expressive in its silence....

oh my God anju....the time i started reading, i cant help smiling on the beauty of your poetry..a masterpiece...a heart from a heart, full of emotions...done with all your love and respect...not just a mere fruit of your brilliancy but fruit of everything in you....very excellent...he must be very happy reading this. ...a fatherly love...which is also true to the fact that mostly fathers dont show much of their feelings....but they love us so much...just beside us to guide us...i love the way you put it into poetry...different...really different, amazing..seems you're a painter aside from being a poet....you're simply a born poet...every words in your mind are already formed into poetry...whatever you think..it is already poetry...if i have to put all the adjectives for your piece..there will be no more space for the others.. lol....A+++++++++++++10+++++++

hey Anju, more than a poetry.. these lines are your emotions. I hv seen, the relationship of a father and daughter is so different.. father - so protective, so caring. daughter - always wishes to see his love for her. but jus as any man, father can only convey his love and care to some extent... may be wid u and him, its ur inbox... All i can say is - u take care of his feelings for now and after a while, he will take care of yours. I feel that One day, u'll see his name before any other below your wonderful poems.

oh whoever you are....take this solemn plea and make her smile...she is more than worthy of it nice write...easy 10

like always a very beautiful and courageous write anju and in some way even tho i feel the same and that was the reason i wrote the poem called 'Jester' because you feel broken inside when you applaud for someone and in return you get nothing, is'nt it.......thanks for sharing this marvellous write 10+++++++++ and A++++++ rgds asif

sometimes father is like that..but still loves his daughters in silent way... but believe me no father hate a daughter..a provoking thought Anju....10 Ency Bearis

a very lively poem as a dad of two daughters i would just say don't bother, he has expressed himself some where, men can't express any further- just keep going anjali- sorry for interfering-10

interesting poem......'dont worry' he will do....

Very beautiful words of truth. I also have a friend on here that reads alot of my work but never comments. He also sends me e-mails to say how well I did. Sometimes people are who they are. I am finding out that as the days go by. Maybe perhaps he feels like you are such a good friend that he need not worry about comments on your page he can just tell you how he feels in e-mails. You are such a brilliant writer and extremely talented. You are a very sweet kind person. I hope he sees your pain and will at least give you an explaination. Take Care, Stacey PS.10 from me

I can say it from house top, My dear Anju you are my own, Who can darling daughter disown? It be not in mystery shroud, Of your talents I am proud. CP

Oh Sire Thinking you as as gentle poet and men I always gave you a perfect ten, But you slaughtered the heart of your daughter by your critical remarks nay bite of sharks. But I now know your remarks were like a pruning the tree So my skills can grow more heavenly and free You showers unconditional love because you know your daughter is more innocent than a lovely dove. Oh heavenly father fill my treasure trove by your encouraging praise and heavenly love. Good Work A10++++++++

It's painful for you..I could feel it through this poem..the hurt of those repeated actions.. But despite the pain..you wrote very deeply..you have the talent..everyone knew that... Thanks for sharing this... and Godbless...