**** My Heaven Comments

Nice, hilarious reminds me of our dear manager mr. Howler.....a bird and two in the bushes!

Very sensuous and steamy poem.a ten.

Some would see this as a good poem i however am sorry to say i disliked it. This was because it seemed to me as though all you were thnking about was her appearance and i think love is more then skin deep. And although the simlies were quiet good, the bit about her fart kind of ruined it.(No Offence- Just my opinion sorry) Think about it, if you got her as your heaven yes at first you would be happy but if she had a horrible personality your joy would be short lived, i would advise you to add a bit about what you want her personality, nature and values to be like. Kind Regards Sonia x

This is good but I think it seems a bit sexist. No offence but I think if I was the person you wrote about I would be offended that you posted this on the web. However, I think that it is an amazing poem :) well done :)

This is a nice poem but, to me, these are not all what I think to get from a heaven.

i love how you use different words meaning how you feel

that is beautiful and it's so out there, it's like a wild dream... my friend maribel says she loves the detail u put in the piece.<3

Woooooosh! Such poetic verve, and spotlite imagework....so many ways, to express romance...and you've cornered quite a few with this fine work...Happy New Year, my friend! F j R 2009

oh my god. that was...amazing. purely amazing. exactly what I want. I'm hanging this one on my wall. It's not 'romantic' in the normal way, but dazzling, captivating, and so sensual. I love it.

oh my god. that was...amazing. purely amazing. exactly what I want. I'm hanging this one on my wall. It's not 'romantic' in the normal way, but dazzling, captivating, and so sensual. I love it.

Romantic and tender, well written Sulamain, Happy New Year, I look forward to reading your poems in 2009, 10 Lynda xx

it's so romantic.. beautiful work..

i love this poem... its very romatic and sweet! ! ! ! ! this poem would really make a gurl happy..

wonderful poem nicely done

Sulaiman, any woman would long to be the only heaven that you would long for! ! ! Your poem is so HOT! ! ! :) Bravo! ! !

Nice. But im kinda tired of hearing of what women SHOULD look like. Were human too... But you and your poems are truly amazing. Your Angel

a very sweet, loving poem indead. wonderful job.

when you're in love, you're in heaven, my friend.. beautiful.. very much well penned..

i very much enjoy this poem, i will read more of you..i have poseted several new poems, i would love a reflection

Fine, sir.Why Adam is banished from your Heaven? Are u very much influenced by the Islamic concept of Heaven?