My Heaven Comments

lovely poem dear Galina. I could vividly imagine the pictures you described in your poem. And as you said, it is close to what I wrote recently. I can say that I feel ya : )

Outstanding in its portrayal of unnoticed love.... why are poems like this not ever featured in Poems of the Day at PoemHunter.com!

Beautiful poem that captures the essence of love ❤, elegantly penned in lovely rhyme scheme from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Galina. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

You wrote the subject of this poem is LOVE but it's also HOPE, and a particularly strong, sturdy, durable hope. The last line asserts this hope with special force in saying MY SOUL IS FOREVER BLUE. and you have prepared that statement for a time of abandonment, when the trusted one's eyes turn gray. Your HEAVEN is not the supernatural place out there, out of reach. It's a very accessible place in the here and now of our emotional hopes and dreams. there is a related word in English HAVEN - that's the kind of heaven your poem celebrates, a safe place, a harbor where we can nurse our heart-wounds and restore our hopes.

So beautifully written Galina with stunning imagery this poem is so deep with passion and love bursting from it's lines of such gentleness and beauty! I love this stunning write!

Faith keeps those who keep the faith - Mother Teresa. A lovely poem penned in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.

Only way is to trust, good writing, thanks.