Monday, October 31, 2005

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In a sea of broken dreams
i was hopelessly sinking,
Overwhelmed was i by the huge, crashing waves,
that were tring to swamp, and drown me.
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Liz Munro
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Simon Whild 01 November 2005

Good use of metaphor here. I liked this poem because of its great visual imagery and it's 'right from the heart' message.

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