Thursday, March 6, 2014

My Hearts Comments

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My hearts
A million of them
Split and cracked with the heat
Inside the pomegranates
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Roseann Shawiak 03 December 2015

On this one I agree with Ken E. Hall, words are put together without a direct thought connecting them, therefore the meaning seems to have been lost. The first four lines were succinct and vivid, liked them! Will continue reading your poetry, thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Liza Sudina 27 October 2015

My hearts A million of them - soothing idea!

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Captain Herbert Poetry 28 April 2014

a very smooth poem rushing to the wind of hearts. Superb Kindly comment on my poems. Thank you very much

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Ken E Hall 07 March 2014

Great words intrerchanged you have talent but the meaning is I find is a little hard to follow I shall return, kind regards

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