Thursday, March 6, 2014
My Hearts Comments
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My hearts
A million of them
Split and cracked with the heat
Inside the pomegranates
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Captain Herbert Poetry
28 April 2014
a very smooth poem rushing to the wind of hearts. Superb Kindly comment on my poems. Thank you very much
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Ken E Hall
07 March 2014
Great words intrerchanged you have talent but the meaning is I find is a little hard to follow I shall return, kind regards
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7/24/2025 8:17:08 PM # 1.0.0
On this one I agree with Ken E. Hall, words are put together without a direct thought connecting them, therefore the meaning seems to have been lost. The first four lines were succinct and vivid, liked them! Will continue reading your poetry, thank you for sharing. RoseAnn