Thursday, November 15, 2007

My Heart Tries To Tell The Paper Comments

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My hand
tries to tell the paper
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Dónall Dempsey
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Scarlett Treat 26 November 2007

Never, no, not one time, have I known the words to fail you, and once again, you have captured the thoughts of how, as writers, we try to 'tell the paper.' I am never sure that we succeed, but when I read your work, I understand love more and more. Thank you for giving me the insight to 'know love' just a bit.

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Dee Dee Wright 22 November 2007

You are forgiven. This is beautiful Donall Donall! I love the repetiton of the phrase '...how it was with us! ' Very touching and tender and warm and wonderful. And despite what the poem says...the words do not fail you. Lovely poem. love Dee Dee

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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