My heart, trembling like a leaf in the first breeze before the storm
As clouds clash high above
Trembles and shivers in the deepest pain
This then is what is called love
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A pictorial image of the emotion with beautiful nature analogies, with sun, moon, storm…the last line justifying the whole.. Well penned stanzas… Abha
Captivating write, kept me gripped to my seat until the final stanza. Really great poem Rani. HG: -) xx
A beautiful flowing write Rani, full of wonderful metaphors, excellent penning, Lynda xxx
storms may tremble us but dreams go on, , , ,