Thursday, May 22, 2008

My Heart, Trembling Like A Leaf Comments

Rating: 3.9

My heart, trembling like a leaf in the first breeze before the storm
As clouds clash high above
Trembles and shivers in the deepest pain
This then is what is called love
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Rani Turton
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Sadiqullah Khan 03 June 2008

storms may tremble us but dreams go on, , , ,

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Abha Sharma 22 May 2008

A pictorial image of the emotion with beautiful nature analogies, with sun, moon, storm…the last line justifying the whole.. Well penned stanzas… Abha

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Original Unknown Girl 22 May 2008

Captivating write, kept me gripped to my seat until the final stanza. Really great poem Rani. HG: -) xx

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Lynda Robson 22 May 2008

A beautiful flowing write Rani, full of wonderful metaphors, excellent penning, Lynda xxx

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