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My Heart Today Is Very Sad And Grey Comments

Rating: 4.6

My Heart Today Is Very Sad and Grey

my heart today
is very sad and grey
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Nabakishore Dash 30 November 2021

Please attend the next birth day.Extremely nice poem where u expressed your sadness befittingly.

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Nabakishore Dash 30 November 2021

Nothing to be sad, like u many are not able to attend

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Rebecca Navarre 15 November 2021

Filled with beautiful love and sentiment! .. Very heart touching! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++ Hope Many blessings kind! ..

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 08 November 2021

All stars smiled for a while to make you happy with the situation and you should not feel so sad any more. Time will bring new opportunity for meeting Erna. A nice birthday poem you have written. An excellent sharing is done. With long working day you have written a nice poem.

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M.J. Lemon 05 November 2021

This is verse is a gem....the greatest of birthday wishes

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 November 2021

Beautiful poem, my friend. The nightingale and rain added so much beauty in this marvelous piece. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 November 2021

Very heartwarming lines. Erna must be so happy in reading this beautiful poem. Despite of your absence in her birthday she in one way or another feel your presence because of this beautiful write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 November 2021

A very lovely poem so well crafted and expressed. The recurring lines in the opening and second stanzas give emphasis to your sadness in your inabilty to attend the birthday of a great friend.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 November 2021

For now, you can wish her and bless her from far. A lovely poem, my dear friend....10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 November 2021

Don't be sad Sylvia. Keep your intentions alive. When the Covid is gone, you can always visit Erna.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 November 2021

To dear Robert, a happy boat, Robert, thank you for your kind comment

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 November 2021

To dear Susan, I appreciate very much your great response and amazing support, I feel btter now, myriad thanks, dear Susan, so loveliest

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Susan Williams 01 November 2021

you have awesome beauty in that pen you wield! ! ! ! deserves a hundred stars for its soul but I can only give 5 stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

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