Wednesday, January 2, 2008

My Heart Takes Wing As It Soars Into Your Presence Comments

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My heart takes wings as it soars into your presence,
on and on deeper into you.
I am twirling in the aura of almighty God,
my senses intoxicated with unending love.
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connie crane
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Khairul Ahsan 20 October 2015

Just read this poem of yours and amazed by its beauty. 'My heart is bursting with passion in response to your touch, and though my eyes are closed, I see You, a radiant Light that pierces the darkness within my soul, and exposes illusion for the vapor it is.' - So wonderfully depicted! ' Your beauty is blinding yet still I can see that love has a substance undefined by me. You are a mystery and I am intrigued.' - Superb!

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