My Heart Sutra Comments

Deepest Love remained untold to enrich the silence of heart, You became 'for my Life' An Epic, The unsung song of My Heart.

cajoling it with unvoiced wish, Memories so sweet to cherish, So painful to heart to evade!

When you say ' I miss You ' My heart swells with music too, With pain unhidden rolls with Joy, Old memories revert to unmindful self,

Deepest Love remained untold to enrich the silence of heart, You became 'for my Life' An Epic, The unsung song of My Heart.

This is amazing, it touched my soul. The lines describes so much how hearts long for love that is far but yet unforgettable. " Under the abyss of emotional cemetery, Deepest Love remained untold to enrich the silence of heart" This really touched my heart, sooo Beautiful! Big, Big 10+++

Silent like grave with sweet flowers, Like a gardener I nourish the Joyful memories embedded with Love, Your Joy and love with bright beauty.

If feelings come back like a time machine, they can become the same again as they used to because love never dies. Wonderful.

An excellent poem dear Prabir! Extremely well written....10+++