Saturday, April 19, 2014

My Heart's Melting Comments

Rating: 4.3

The sun like yolk
Spread over the horizon.
The evening shadows
Were touching fondly my skin.
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Olga Ogradyuk
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Saniya Galeyeva 01 April 2018

A wonderful poem! Deep and full of hope. I love it.

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Fabrizio Frosini 07 January 2015

thanks for sharing your nice lines, Olga. Have a bright 2015!

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F J Thomas 30 June 2014

Beautiful Olga :) I've used the same persuasion method to quiet my mind a few times. I'm afraid it is less affective on the heart though sad to say.

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Saadat Tahir 14 June 2014

When the sun's up again And the wine's over On the wave of new feelings I'll just start my trip. is it a translation..... very nice...liked

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Richard Phoenix 13 June 2014

This poem speaks to the soul that has undergone a tumultous life. very nicely written!

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Gajanan Mishra 19 April 2014

very good writing, I like it, thanks. Please read my poems and comment.

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