My heart wanders around
searching for love that is not found
only a true heart will find what it needs
but a life that is wrong cannot receive
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" My heart needs to make right the wrong my heart needs somewhere to belong" nice lines. Find a fit home for your heart, keep not your flesh and soul apart. A fit home that can tell wrong from right. so heart can true and upright.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me such a nice score. I am happy you liked it.
Your poem is excellence. I love it. Keep up to your great work. :)
So glad you have visited my poems and happy you like this one. We inspire each other so keep writing and reading :)
A beautiful poem exploring methods to be adopted in quest of true love. Congrats on POD.
Those who live for love And want to give it, Are happier and Better people, Not just crows Waiting to do harm From yonder steeple. A very beautiful and intense poem, sincere, that fully reaches the heart. Congratulation on its well deserved selection as poem of the day.
Hello my friends and thank you. I just noticed that my poem easvchosen today. I did not know. I know it's kind of shocking that I didn't know I must have missed the email notifying me. I knew because a friend inbox me to congratulate me and so here I am looking at all these wonderful comments tonight.. It is because of all of you that I continue to be inspired.
Wow. What an amazing poem, Aqua! Also, a jazzy name to boot. Congrats on one of the best poems I've read. This one should be " Poem of The Year! I am rating it a 10*!
Love for oneself, love for life and love for one another is all we need. May your heart be enriched with love.
Like the song all we need is love, love is all we need? Yet so true.
Congratulations on this very heartfelt poem being selected as Member Poem Of The Day.
I had visited this poem earlier and found it lovely, very happy now that it has been selected as POD. congrats
Visiting this poem for the second time. A very emotional write. Hope you get true love soon. Congrats.
3) CONGRATULATIONS for being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, dear Aqua. Such greatest insight and so much beauty, most deserving poem. I will read this time and again, sure. Love is indeed most important and precious in a human life. A 10 and myriad of 10's for this more than most beautiful poem, Super amazingly written. The title is sublimest chosen, it will grip every reader. To MyPoemList
WOW! Twice chosen, dear Aqua, truly most deserving, same date last year. Double Congrats!
2) .............then.......My thirst for true love will never be quenched, if I don't make myself whole.......................absolutely true. When I saw this adorable poem at first sight, my heart leaps up, undescribable! Such a most beautiful utterance, so poetic and yet so humble. The most fascinating poem I read this morn, so much truth and yet so adorable
I cite you here, dear Aqua Flower: My heart needs to make right the wrong my heart needs somewhere to belong.................you said it very right, a heart that is still feeling wrong, cannot get something right where it wishes to belong, because it still has the face of wrong, once that face has the face of right, then everywhere it can belong to.
Congrats! any poem on love by anyone is amazing but this one is more than amazing!
This one is extra-ordinary, that you must know, dear Akhtar Sir, you as an experienced poet. I THOUGHT that you will make it a reality on what you think. Is this adorable poem, this unique poem only " more than amazing? " . I doubt that. Thank you so much that I may point this.
Nice one. Love is the sweetness of life.