Saturday, May 27, 2017

My Heart, My Soul Comments

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My weary eyes wide open stuck in the moment, drowning in silence,
Zoomed into the shattering pieces of my heart
As darkened clouds surrounds me with fear,
Tears run down my cheeks.
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Sochukwu Ivye 20 October 2017

Sheer emotional piece that reveals the writer's mastery of Pathos. This is provocatively endearing. Your man must be a lucky one.

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Messaoud Allalouche 30 August 2017

very nice romantic poem I like it very much Ana

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Dev Anand 11 August 2017

My feet so numb, my mouth so shut of all the words I am dying to say. Can you hear my heartbeat? can u feel my love? ? very nice poem full of expressions, sadness, heartache, hurt, lost love dreams.. thank you dear poetess.

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