I see life's beauty all around me,
No clouds in my sky of blue;
A gentle breeze carries the song of a bird,
But my heart is longing for you
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Love is so fulfilling, yet often so tantalizingly elusive, and leaves us without desire for anything else. Fine work, Lora. :)
For my heart is just longing for you the poem is radiant with the soulful refrain!
I love the way you rhyme Lora. This is fine poetry and the longing for someone is felt throughout. Good stuff.
You are a skilled poetess..the longing for that special person is so apparent...as usual beautifully presented with rhythm and rhyme. Into my poemlist