Saturday, November 30, 2013

My Heart Longs For You Comments

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I see life's beauty all around me,
No clouds in my sky of blue;
A gentle breeze carries the song of a bird,
But my heart is longing for you
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Lora Colon
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Bipasha D 12 December 2018

You are a skilled poetess..the longing for that special person is so apparent...as usual beautifully presented with rhythm and rhyme. Into my poemlist

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Seamus O Brian 15 September 2016

Love is so fulfilling, yet often so tantalizingly elusive, and leaves us without desire for anything else. Fine work, Lora. :)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 02 December 2013

For my heart is just longing for you the poem is radiant with the soulful refrain!

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David Lessard 01 December 2013

I love the way you rhyme Lora. This is fine poetry and the longing for someone is felt throughout. Good stuff.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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