Friday, February 6, 2009

My Heart (Long Poem) Comments

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Ah, so new and fresh
So full of zest
Strong to no end
Withstands every test
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ata khan 11 February 2009

Beautiful poem, nicely rhymed. I like it a lot: -) 10/10

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Tyease Collins 09 February 2009

This poem was so awesome! I loved how you rhymed in the poem it flowed so well. I can't believe hat even after he cheated you took him back geez lol. But i understand how strong love is. This poem was excellent 10/10 -Tyease

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