Wednesday, May 7, 2008

My Heart Is Yours Comments

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My love, I have tried with all my being
to grasp a form comparable to thine own,
but nothing seems worthy;
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louise smith
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William Jackson 23 May 2008

I really like this poem and your allusions to Shakespeare. It makes me think of the concluding lines of 'My Mistress' Eyes are Nothing Like the Sun in which Shakespeare says his love for the dark lady is more genuine than that of those other flatterers who make false comparisons in their poetry when writing about their loves. While your declaration of affection is quite direct and over the top, it is nevertheless sincere. Kudos to you for writing such a delightful love poem.

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Riquetta Elliott 08 May 2008

That is so romantic to say louise. William Shakespeare will be proud of you with your excellent writing. Keep it up.

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