My love, I have tried with all my being
to grasp a form comparable to thine own,
but nothing seems worthy;
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That is so romantic to say louise. William Shakespeare will be proud of you with your excellent writing. Keep it up.
I really like this poem and your allusions to Shakespeare. It makes me think of the concluding lines of 'My Mistress' Eyes are Nothing Like the Sun in which Shakespeare says his love for the dark lady is more genuine than that of those other flatterers who make false comparisons in their poetry when writing about their loves. While your declaration of affection is quite direct and over the top, it is nevertheless sincere. Kudos to you for writing such a delightful love poem.