My Heart Is Torn Comments
My heart is torn.
Where is the lovely moon today?
Where is the light falling on the flowing river?
Where are the melodies of the flute
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May be coincidence.. but this is exactly how i feel today... thank you.... i do not feel alone now...
Sad! You write on varied topics and all of them beautiful. This poem really did wrench my heart. and everytime i read sad poems I only hope they are imaginary. The world full of color when in Love! ! and mute, black and in a void when heartbroken.. this piece is beautiful.
A deep touching poem of a sorrowful heart feeling empty on separation from the beloved.There are moments in ife when one feels unloved, un cared, being drained of energy as if life's all pleasure has been snatched and beauty of flower or moon lose their relevance.The torn heart cries for love. If one cares to see into one, s own soul one can find love sitting there.It is God's kindness that love manifests in many forms.Even in separation there is love.The insight and faith can find love in small things of life.
Thank you very much dear Poetess for your great comments. it encourages me. Thank you again. God bless you
You are expert in language so i wont point on that...but i will point on the emotion in the poem, because as human we all expert about it through heart and experiences...and i would say the poem really a handful of composed writing that if it stand on the water, i can see the sorrow on it surface...a reflection not just a shadow. Nice work Tony
thank you dear Poetess for your wonderful comments. it encourages me a lot
Love and care are always with you Dr. 'I hear only the only mourning sound of women', Did any body died in the village? ' these lines reflect the empathy, love and care of your mind towards the society. so thousands of grieving souls fly around you as angels of GOD to console you at every moment - from me ten/ten
my dear Poet. thank you very much for your comments. it encourages me a lot to write and write. God bless you dear Poet.
A feeling of total emptiness and abandonment come from beneath the surface of these lines. How does one give their love across the miles? Will only words ease the pain of another grieving, When experiencing loss we tend to go within ourselves, our sorrow is so all-encompassing that we cannot see the world and it's beauty around us. Our sorrow must be experienced fully, we each must find it's understanding individually in order to surmount it. Yet, a loving, caring heart of another reaching out can go a long way to easing the loneliness that is always felt. Someone who will just BE there for another, not having to talk, listening, bonding in the silence of sorrow and loss. It is the one experience of humanity that we must all go through, therefore we all need to BE there for each other, doing whatever we can to help one another in these times of abandonment and need. My heart and love reach out to you, I feel the pain of a torn heart across the miles and offer my love. May the knowing of your grief and sorrow by another bring some peace as your tears continue to fall. We are still just children no matter our age, we need to know love, caring, compassion from others. Your poem is poignantly beautiful, touching the hearts of many. Take care. You will find the love of self and God within your broken heart, it takes time, it will come. Thank you for sharing your heart-felt emotions and feelings, they have not gone unfelt. RoseAnn
Dear Roseann, thank you very very much for your comments. you try to get into my mind when you write. i am so happy to read it. We poets shall support eachother always. God bless you.
Loved reading the poem. Truly, Man is in need of love from a new born child upto doddering old age
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7/27/2025 4:35:54 AM # 1.0.0
excellent work aa usual...Dr. Tony...I am a great admirer of your writing skills...keep writing..rating 10