Monday, August 17, 2020

My Heart Is That Door Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart is that door
Whichever has been shut
For good since ages
It doesn't open to pariahs
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Anjandev Roy 18 August 2020

Till the dearth of time......fine.....thanks for sharing......anjandev roy.

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M Asim Nehal 17 August 2020

Let the wind enter it, Let the birds sit on the balcony Let the door ajar....And see the magic. A wonderful poem with lots of feelings kept locked inside your door...100++

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Sharad Bhatia 17 August 2020

Good evening mam, this is a very sad and emotionally poignant poem. I think this type of situation will arise when a person feels alone and no one can talk to them. But on the other hand " doors" are always positive for our lives Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem

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Varsha M 17 August 2020

Aarzoo very touchy poem. Past often has lesson But to make you fearsome But to teach you precise Difference between fool and wise Good and evil in disguise Right and wrong vibe To make you mature little more Until the sun shines on the sky blue And you chose to do good all the more Even though your hurt is all the more worse Your good is most prescious treasure Maybe a healer for some Even though your hurt is all the more worse Your good is most prescious treasure.

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