Tuesday, January 3, 2012

My Heart Is Slave Of Morning Scene Comments

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serene is the dawn and calm mind...
soft is the grass with drops of dew
clouds are grey on the sky blue
flowers fresh and trees look kind
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Shahzia Batool
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Valsa George 16 May 2013

The freshness of the morning with all its glory wafts across! Perhaps no poet can stay unmoved by the alluring charm of a clear, cool dawn! Enjoyed! !

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Captain Cur 29 May 2012

Tremendously uplifting and elegantly written poem. An amazing and fresh ending.

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The Nookie 04 January 2012

Hi Shahzia, Loved the freshness in your poem, it was short & sweet. keep up the good work \m/ Do have a look on ma poem I WANNA LIVE AS I AM DEAD Expecting your feedback.....

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Vipins Puthooran 04 January 2012

I relish reading this amazing poem))) What an elegant words structure! ! ! It's beautifulllllllll! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++++++++

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Vipins Puthooran 04 January 2012

I relish reading this amazing poem))) What an elegant words structure! ! ! It's beautifulllllllll! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++++++++

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Shahzia Batool

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