Saturday, October 10, 2015

My Heart Is Revolving And Lingering With Love! Comments

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Inherent bashfulness pulling me to one side,
…the beauty of the Chola King KiLLi
making my mind to melt on another side,
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Dr.V.K. Kanniappan
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 10 October 2015

Like an ant on a stick burning both ends, i am caught with a burning heart with love Between restraining woman's bashfulness And itching to embrace Killi's shoulders.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 10 October 2015

Thanks for your comments and poem. Excellent and crisp in same four lines! Experience and seniority counts! Poor man like me tries to explain fully, to make people of other country understand entirely!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 10 October 2015

Like an ant on a stick burning both ends, i am caught with a burning heart with love Between retraining woman's bashfulness And itching to embrace Killi's shoulders

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Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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