Tuesday, January 8, 2008

My Heart Is In Need Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here it is at one-oh-five.
The air is fresh...
And I'm alive.
Wanting more...
...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Alison Cassidy 09 January 2008

The youthful need never leaves - thank God. Beautifully written poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Patricia Gale 08 January 2008

A yearning heart well portrayed L..... fine work

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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