Monday, January 18, 2016

My Heart Is Immune To Pain! Comments

Rating: 4.8

I locked my heart
And threw away the key
In a sorrowful sea
Left without emotions
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Anjandev Roy 28 September 2023

This is an exceptional piece....thanks for sharing....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 September 2023

I wouldn't let anybody/Again rule my heart/To trample it with insensitivity.....appreciate the poigant poetic expression dear poetess. Stay blessed!

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 February 2016

Nobody deserves my emotions To share or to borrow I wouldn't let anybody Again rule my heart To trample it with................. i threw away the key............. these experiences made u a great poetess.. good for us fellow readers. thank you. God bless yu. still you are not alone. tony

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 12 February 2016

A very sad poem from a sad sad sad heart.

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M Asim Nehal 01 February 2016

Heartfelt poem...............There is a story behind every pain....And pain has hidden healing power as well...10++++

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Kelly Kurt 22 January 2016

Try as we might, we cannot completely control our hearts. I hope yours finds joy

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Dileep Perambra 20 January 2016

Is your heart seeks immunity? beautiful language...................

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Seema Chowdhury 19 January 2016

A poignant write. take care

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Valsa George 18 January 2016

The deep hurt and sense of sorrow you feel in your heart find poignant expression here! Sometimes we feel so lonely and isolated in life. but let it be transitional phase! Believe that at the end of the tunnel, there is light! Such a hope will give one the strength to jump over all hurdles of life! A very sensational write!

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 January 2016

Sadness! No man is worth my tears; but, someone cares for you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 18 January 2016

Those who hurts us don't deserves our love affections and care....liked it...heart touching poem...thank u for sharing :)

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Nosheen Irfan 18 January 2016

Simply wow...a deep sense of pain prevails through the poem. Being a woman, I completely understand your emotions here and relate to them too. Though the poet is hurt but she hasn't lost her inner strength which is very admirable. I also love the rhythm n easy flow of the poem.10

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