James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Thursday, January 5, 2012

' My Heart Is Heavy' Comments

Rating: 3.3

From the center of my heart, your many lost songs.
From the heart of one single tear.
I am lost like you both apart, one is beating.
Gone from our gentle childhood.
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James McLain
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So full of emotion, gentle, soft touch of love like the rose petals and a healing poem that heals the heart. Thank you James for this beautiful poem.......10

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Soran M. H 27 December 2019

Gentle the thorn the red rose never picked. ............... might once that heaviness will go away... we hope great poem 10/10

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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. A passionate piece with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, James.

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Valentin Savin 10 February 2019

Well written: Gentle the thorn the red rose never picked. You are seen healing the hearts of them all. Thanks for sharing

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Akhtar Jawad 21 May 2018

One of my songs does not belong now to me. However when light is from the moon, You I found. Moon brings the love that suits to you.

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A creative and compelling composition that is full of feeling and loaded with love. Well done my friend!

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Thomas Case 04 January 2016

go0od poem touching and beautiful.

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Gary H 31 October 2015

This is a good poem, enjoyed it a lot thats for true.

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Melvina Germain 26 June 2015

I truly enjoyed the journey through this gem of a poem.....

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Christian Hudak 17 May 2015

enjoyed this very much so!

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An enjoyable read my friend!

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Shania K. Younce 18 March 2014

A very beautiful poem. I really like it. Bien!

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Patricia Grantham 30 November 2013

So very touching a poem. Written with such fellings and intensity. Good.

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Heather Wilkins 29 June 2013

beautifully expressed poem. enjoyed the read

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Meena Mustafa 20 August 2012

A excellent write! tyvm

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 15 February 2012

Very profound, it cuts deep into the heart. The words expressed the feelings so intensely. Excellent writing!

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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