Wednesday, June 18, 2008

My Heart Is Dark Comments

Rating: 4.8

Filled with anger, my heart is dark.
Darkness is around me, from the people that surround me.
Another day has gone, and my heart is still dark.
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Chinedu Dike 05 December 2015

Lovely depiction of hope at last, in prostrated deplorable situation, experienced in life at its lowest ebb well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Faith keeps those that keep the faith - Mother Teresa. Thanks for sharing Var. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Christine Blaydes 28 March 2012

Dark and disturbed, I like it=D

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Romeo Della Valle 07 August 2011

Once you bury your past and move on with your hope toward the end of the path where you will find light! Outburst of the heart honestly expressed through this well penned and poignant poem! Thank you for sharing! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World! with your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City....

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